So without being totally aware of it I actually am somewhat improving. Not that I think I'm doing as best as I ever will this year cause IT'S GONNA CHANGE ok. But seriously back in the day when the school year first started I was just like "you know what, we're all gonna die anyway, I'm gonna be a bum" but not literally and uhm yea so basically I realized the way I wrote made absolutely no sense and in a way I am improving like I said it's just that I have horrible punctuation and I am making a lot of run on sentences right now but you know what I don't care I'm going to make this whole paragraph a run on sentence so I can say that not only were my old papers not in time but they were horrible as well and now I only have one of those problems which is turning in papers on time.Honestly I don't really know what I'm going to do for that overview portfolio thing. Like I really don't want to lie and all I have to say is that now I don't suck as much with writing serious papers I THINK but I mean come on I am so lazy I can not turn in anything on time. Watch that overview thing be in when I'm a senior. No that's a joke, I'm actually going to turn that one in. I will make myself do it, ok. I WILL ACHIEVE IT.
Anthony, the assignment here was to review your comments on the three papers and make a decision about what paper you would revise and which two traits of good writing you would focus on.
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